Ballerina With Fins


Middle-Aged Couple - Poem by Ballerina With Fins

My
Chanel
lipstick
seems
to have
crumbled
and
I don't
seem
to
care

His
pink
boxers
no
longer
irk me

we
share
a bed
like
brother
and
sister

and
everywhere
we
gothere
seems to
be
an
invisible
line
between
us

even if we appear to be going nowhere at all.


Comments about Middle-Aged Couple by Ballerina With Fins

  • (5/20/2006 7:31:00 AM)


    So many would agree, how to re-kindle a flame when embers seem so low
    both must blow upon them when willing
    love DuncanX
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  • (5/19/2006 7:41:00 AM)


    Oh..i guess the change of title did help...

    hehe

    middle age(married life) crisis well described~

    Preets
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  • (5/13/2006 4:04:00 AM)


    hmm, good point. I was debating with myself about the title. I'd better change it then. Thanks Fran (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2006 3:52:00 AM)


    Don't know about sharing a bed like sister and brother! ! Wouldn't be lovers if that was the case. Maybe the poem should be called 'Middle-aged Spouses' ha ha.

    Love, Fran xx
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 13, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 20, 2006


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