jack green

Rookie - 44 Points (Chattanooga, Tennessee)

Middle Of Both End's - Poem by jack green

Right in the palm of my empty hands.
Pass the chance of make to break.
Hope is whispers on fading winds.
Climb over correct to achieve mistake.
Cut off an arm to save a hand.
Wasted days from sleep to wake.
The life of a memory recorded in sand..
Short changed in life partnered with foresake
Shadows of the past at present demand.
Looking back then forward both directions a mistake.
Future is a bright light hard to comprehend.
Past touches present truth is never fake.
My flame is fading from the middle of both ends.
Past and future are only seperated by the present break.


Comments about Middle Of Both End's by jack green

  • (1/20/2012 7:01:00 PM)


    As soon as I read the first line, I knew it was going to be be a true expireince. I've read it 5 times now and still get captivated every time. It is trully amazing what who have written and reflecting on your life. Well done, you are a true poet (Report) Reply

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  • Victor Okechukwu Anyaegbuna (1/12/2012 8:04:00 PM)


    A good poem. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/21/2011 12:29:00 PM)


    A great poem! ! elegant penning! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 21, 2011


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