Milky Way Poem by Rini Shibu
Milky Way
Like a planet you are revolving
around an energy
In the milky way of this life
Where you are heading
and where is the ending
Life is so vast
like the universe it's expanding
People around you like stars they are burning
And a moon specially created for you
On it's axis around you is always rotating
Though hide and seek it's playing
Oh! Very good! ! I like the metaphor going on here- it gives importance even to the most average of lives to see it set in the midst of the universe like this. Total originality and totally scenic! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++
Where you are heading and where is the ending Life is so vast...universal. life and death is a great mystery. in between we fall in l ove. we have sexual union, and we think foolishly love will never end....... thank u for ur great thoughts.. tony
Rini, we have our own universe within our minds. We also have those around us who disappear into black holes and others who shine for us like the stars above. An imaginative write with great imagery.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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6/9/2024 10:47:20 AM # 1.0.0.1119
a wonderful creative right we are like the stars that shine bright? ...............well written Rini
Thanks Tom for reading and commenting..! !