Rini Shibu

Gold Star - 95,150 Points (1978 / India)

Warming - Poem by Rini Shibu

Sun drenched over the land
Through the slits in the sky
Ponds and rivers are drying
In hunger and thirst people are crying.

Deep Cracks in the land
Dried up the trees and the plants
In heatwave forest burning
No air to breath lives are suffering.

In the warmth glaciers are melting
Climate changing and sea rising
Floods and storms are increasing
Save earth stop this warming.

Topic(s) of this poem: earth


Comments about Warming by Rini Shibu

  • Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra (8/6/2018 12:36:00 PM)

    A heartwarming poem that would well deliver to the very cause it is aimed at.
    Global warming has turned to be the most alarming danger for our planet.
    Thanks dear Rini for the contribution.
    10+++++
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  • Robert Murray SmithRobert Murray Smith (7/1/2018 11:08:00 PM)

    Climate change has been around from the Earth's beginings. Today, and for the period of industralisation it has been accelerated by man's pollution. We need to cut greenhouse gasses. Many governments are working on this. Rin, your poem highlights the effects. Well penned.++10i (Report)Reply

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  • Jez BurlJez Burl (4/18/2018 7:18:00 AM)

    For a save-the-earth advocacy in a poem, here is your 10+++++ and to my poem list..❤️ (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(4/18/2018 8:00:00 AM)

    Thanks Jez for visiting this poem.! !

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  • Walterrean Salley (3/1/2018 5:59:00 AM)

    Many don't take it to heart, until too late. Thanks for the awareness. (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(3/1/2018 6:03:00 AM)

    Thanks walterrean...your poems are amazing

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  • Bipasha DBipasha D (1/14/2018 8:40:00 PM)

    Thanks Rini for a poem on environment, a subject I am deeply passionate about. (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(1/15/2018 11:17:00 AM)

    It's our responsibility to save our earth.. Thanks Bipasha

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (12/27/2017 3:24:00 AM)

    slits in the sky, No air to breath lives are suffering., Climate changing and sea rising,
    Save earth..... a great cry from your poetic pen.......... surely it is our need now... thank you for making all conscious of this...... thank you dear poetess. tony
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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(12/27/2017 9:34:00 PM)

    Thanks for your remarks Tony

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (12/2/2017 2:22:00 AM)

    The influences of sun on earth has been astutely and touchingly inscrbed by you dear Rini. It may be quoted.....
    In the warmth glaciers are melting
    Climate changing and sea rising
    Floods and storms are increasing
    Save earth stop this warming.
    Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(12/2/2017 4:07:00 AM)

    Thanks Kumar for your comment

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (11/6/2017 8:10:00 AM)

    SOS signal of earth heared by Rini Jerry well in time, she raised her voice and I join her but is it enough? (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(11/6/2017 8:52:00 AM)

    Thanks Akhtar for your remarks it mean a lot to me

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (10/18/2017 2:06:00 PM)

    Teree hulkee phulkee muskrahat......jaan kitnoe ka legee....... kya ilm hain kisseee koe bhee....ktni jaane hain ley chukee..... teri muskaan aoouron kee....bun gayeee hai jaan...maann ya na maan...aaj sey hum bhe hogaye aapkay mehmaaan....lenee hai to laylo sahee...abhhe aouron kay saath humarre jaan bheee... abhee jee hahn abhee hee ]]]]]]]]]]KINDLY EDIT IT PLEASE. (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(10/18/2017 3:15:00 PM)

    Dear poet I am not good in hindi /urdu to do editing for this poem.
    Thanks for visiting my poem

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  • Saji G Praleyagiri (10/11/2017 6:22:00 AM)

    Dear Rini, Ur. poem reflect the existence of earth and nature is really a W'arning to nature killers as explained in my poem 'Beings' Silent Request' may U read. Thank U. for sharing the poem. (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(10/11/2017 8:07:00 AM)

    Thanks sajid.. Sure will read your poem

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  • Jabulani MzinyathiJabulani Mzinyathi (9/23/2017 6:04:00 AM)

    what have we done to mother earth. mankind has been suicidal therefore. self destruction mode. heal the world. (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(9/23/2017 5:16:00 PM)

    Thanks jabulani

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  • Sarah Mkhonza (9/8/2017 4:59:00 PM)

    Thus is so So true. This poem tells the truth about the changing world. (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(9/9/2017 4:14:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Sarah for visiting my poem..

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  • Seamus O BrianSeamus O Brian (8/24/2017 3:16:00 PM)

    It is tragic that the only beings on this planet capable of thinking, so often think only of the short-term. A compelling and vivid warning highlighting the consequences of such a narrow perspective. Well done, good poet! (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(8/24/2017 3:52:00 PM)

    Thank you so much Brian
    Rini

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  • Ravi SathasivamRavi Sathasivam (8/15/2017 12:53:00 AM)

    Excellent.. Lovely write. Enjoyed reading it. (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(8/15/2017 3:11:00 AM)

    Thanks Ravi....

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  • Cheryl TutaanCheryl Tutaan (8/8/2017 7:03:00 PM)

    A power to change climate change! Really a nice poem to read and to share...thank you, Rini....++++++10 (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(8/8/2017 11:05:00 PM)

    Thank you so much Cheryl for the comments

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  • Siddartha MontikSiddartha Montik (6/19/2017 2:52:00 AM)

    Nice write of warming morning Sun shine! ..and yet with a subtle message for Nature awareness! (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(6/19/2017 7:37:00 AM)

    Thanks Siddhartha...
    Rini

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  • Unnikrishnan E S (6/18/2017 9:21:00 PM)

    Hi Rini,
    Increasing Global warming, emission of green-house gases threat the very existence of life on our planet. But there are monsters like trump (of course, with a small t) who wish to ignore this.

    Your poem points to this most relevant contemporary issue. Nice work; very responsible write. Congratulations.. A 10+++
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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(6/18/2017 10:50:00 PM)

    Thanks you..didn't expect the exit of US from paris climate accord.

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (6/17/2017 9:53:00 AM)

    your lovely poetry has been read by me
    now you need to read some of mine o pet ye
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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(6/17/2017 1:11:00 PM)

    Sure dear poet

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (6/16/2017 10:37:00 PM)

    congrats....really nice
    what a lovely poetic
    discovery
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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(6/17/2017 12:08:00 AM)

    Thanks dear poet..
    Rini

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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (6/14/2017 7:39:00 PM)

    Global warming is really a serious problem for the earth that your poem brings to focus.Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(6/15/2017 12:46:00 AM)

    Thanks for reading my poem..
    Rini

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 5, 2017

Poem Edited: Monday, June 5, 2017


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