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Mind Walking - Poem by AKHIL RAVEENDRAN

Poem name; Mind walking
Written by; akhil raveendram
Date; 30august 2015

Sitting in the empty zone,
And walking in the empty space.
What is in the empty space.
What is in that paradise.,
Any one reach those destiny,
Any one do those fantasy.
Close your eyes and make your feel,
You can see my paradise.
What you feel, and what you do.
When I dream, I can reach,
I am blind and mad in dream..
Then, what is use of useless dream,
The mind is playing in this game.
Why you check inner dreams,
That is not an easy game
I can see your darker face,
That is why, I interfere.
If I did a big mistake, saying sorry hundred times.
And I will go far away.
It is only my mistake, and I am not blaming you..
Free to say, what you want.
when you reach this empty zone.
keep an eye and cross my mind.
And close your eye, feel your dreams.

Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness, love and art, painful

Form: Ballad

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 31, 2015

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