Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,511 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Minimum Level - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Let the truth remain to its level of minimum
But the lies should not dominate at maximum
As it will wrack the hard core element of life with its relation
Everything will be demolished and raise the questions

Think of damage and its consequences there after
When it has become known and apparent later
It might have then brought everything at stand still
Leaving behind tail of distrust and almost ill will

I know for sure that eyes speak no untruth
You may need nothing as an extra proof
The company may be needed at each turn
For the love and affection to respond and return

No one can definitely say about lust or real
It remains closely guarded secret and concealed
How can a human mind speak in anticipation?
When whole thing is built round honesty and relation

Sometimes we listen to but not attentively
We commit nothing and assure tentatively
This raise mistrust level and forecast doom
Leaving behind no chance for return in room

Any affection or attachment comes after long consideration
But once it is cemented then it has consent with full indication
It is grown at enormous speed with full commitment
You can feel k exhilaration in those happy moments

Sometimes it creates thaw in relation get stranded
Others sentiments are not taken care of and offended
Whole relation comes at stake and runs into rough weather
It faces grinding halt and adds concern for everybody to bother

Those moments prove costly in life and de-shape the imagination
The relation on which whole future evolved causes great alienation
Both are drifted apart much to the embarrassment and concern
Life has taken different course with point of no return

As it has been observed and advocated in precise terms
Truth always forms strong foundation at each turn
After all it is trust and confidence that is grown from feeling
Nothing should be done at this level when it comes almost willing


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/29/2011 6:02:00 PM)


    Elż bieta Kry.. hard drive..... Delete..... life..... i.... heart......

    Beware tifa R.. well said tnx sir

    vincent michael Wonderfull Thank You hasmukh amathalal

    » Marina MM... Truth always forms strong foundation... yes!
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 21, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 22, 2011


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