I loved you once, you took me in
With chubby cheeks you made me grin
I love you for you give me back
Without hiding in your sack
Once I found you in my teens
Made me pretty, all my means
Found you grow me all seasons
Nature filling moons and suns
For some time you missed me there
Then I found me missing here
Dancing I was with my dear
Lust and love, hai! keep me cheer
You made me reflect without mask
All these questions may I ask
Without answer you showed me
Wife and mother I can be
With grey hair I thought wisdom come
Grey hair did not make wise some
Wisdom gained, I found me failed
Oh! Mirror, can you make me resolved
I thought you keep me all absorbed
Without letting time involved
But, I found in you me sold
Once decked with a speck of gold
Pasanna>>>A very melodious work....Structured tight & crisp....rhythm & rhyme pattern metered nicely....Solid work, Pasanna''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
you seem to b pretty careful with the rhymes...it lends a beautiful beat to the poem when 1 recites it... i liked this 1...
Great imagery and style. Where were you all these times? Anjana
mirror reflect your body image and this poem reflect your great thought.
The imagery is just perfect woven around the theme. I feel you have immense talent and you should write more often. Waiting to read more of your works.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
With grey hair I thought wisdom come Grey hair did not make wise some Wisdom gained, I found me failed Oh! Mirror, can you make me resolved AmmA the great feel make us in its love and emotion