Mirror Poem by prasanna kumari

Mirror

Rating: 5.0


I loved you once, you took me in
With chubby cheeks you made me grin
I love you for you give me back
Without hiding in your sack

Once I found you in my teens
Made me pretty, all my means
Found you grow me all seasons
Nature filling moons and suns

For some time you missed me there
Then I found me missing here
Dancing I was with my dear
Lust and love, hai! keep me cheer

You made me reflect without mask
All these questions may I ask
Without answer you showed me
Wife and mother I can be

With grey hair I thought wisdom come
Grey hair did not make wise some
Wisdom gained, I found me failed
Oh! Mirror, can you make me resolved

I thought you keep me all absorbed
Without letting time involved
But, I found in you me sold
Once decked with a speck of gold

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 04 September 2006

With grey hair I thought wisdom come Grey hair did not make wise some Wisdom gained, I found me failed Oh! Mirror, can you make me resolved AmmA the great feel make us in its love and emotion

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 September 2006

Pasanna>>>A very melodious work....Structured tight & crisp....rhythm & rhyme pattern metered nicely....Solid work, Pasanna''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Asma Bahrainwala 19 September 2006

you seem to b pretty careful with the rhymes...it lends a beautiful beat to the poem when 1 recites it... i liked this 1...

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Anjana Aravind 13 September 2006

Great imagery and style. Where were you all these times? Anjana

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Yashar rezaeipour 13 September 2006

mirror reflect your body image and this poem reflect your great thought.

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Catastrophe King 05 September 2006

The imagery is just perfect woven around the theme. I feel you have immense talent and you should write more often. Waiting to read more of your works.

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