Man And Nature Poem by prasanna kumari

Man And Nature

Rating: 4.5


As I walked along the path
Crushing grass under with wrath
That wanted to whisper sounds
Left unsaid beyond bounds

As I rested under the tree
One blue leaf fell on me
That wanted to conspire with light
Planning future far in sight

As I passed a well-known tree
One blue and blushing smile on me
That brought me back my youth
And sure, well did it soothe

As I passed the mountain still
Stopping wind to play on hill
Flirting flower and dancing deer
Lulling leaves all keep me near

As the brooding breeze did wink
And the fading sun did sink
Bringing me my memory past
Dissolving the moon at last

When I left a lasting sigh
Dancing waves did keep me high

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjana Aravind 13 September 2006

Admiring nature is a never ending pleasure. I like the rhythms and wordings. Excellent poem. Anjana

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Tranquil Ocean 05 September 2006

Nature has the most beautiful soothing effect paralleled by no other.Well said in a very soothing manner. Love...TO

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Asma Bahrainwala 19 September 2006

well-worked rhyme scheme...aa bb/ cc dd......... i like the enjambment... the poem just flows.. nice write..

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Kesav Easwaran 18 May 2008

How beautifully you put a stop to end your poem with moon dissolving your nature watch at the day's end! Good flow of clear water- like words... ten I give!

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 09 March 2008

Like somewhere I read this excellent work similar to the classic...keep writing good one

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Roger Bowman 02 December 2006

Great poemo Prasanna. I wish you all the best Roger

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 September 2006

I LIKE THIS A LOT...SOLID CRAFTSMANSHIP ALL AROUND....SPECIFIC HIGHLIGHTS INCLUDE: Vivid Imagework...Smooth fluxion...Tight Structure '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Rajaram Ramachandran 20 September 2006

A nice construction of each line in the poem. Well done.

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