I see you looking back at me
With absolute disgrace
You don't even blink an eye
Just a blank stare on your face
How could someone want you?
With such a hateful glare
How can someone love you?
If you don't even care
You let yourself go
You look such a mess
The only excuse you offer
Is pain and distress
You have to do something
You can't just let it be
For every where you go
You'll be staring back at me
Nice flow and rhymes. How about a 9? Hmm.. on further reflection, definitely a 10. - chuck
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Looking in the mirror our views often change. If life is shining our eyes are sparkling and we see beauty. If struggling we see pain that shows no beauty. Lovely to read your work. I wish you well.