Miss Love Poem by Amit Jaiswal

Miss Love

Rating: 5.0


Sparkle of your eyes,
diamond of your earings,
landscape of your face,
kills me every night when I think.

shyness of your eyes,
smile on your cheeks,
whisper of your words,
kills me every time when I feel.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepti Agarwal 12 December 2008

hmm..lovely once again... cud have written more to it... :)

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*Trusting You* 13 December 2008

I agree with Deepti it reads like it should go on... but this is very cute, shows that you care for this person a lot. lots of emotion in this. good job. Becca

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Kesav Easwaran 31 January 2009

what you think is almost the same as what you feel...good devotional love piece for your miss Love, Amid...10

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Malini Kadir 15 December 2008

Waiting for your next poetry Amit!

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Sumita Datta 14 December 2008

I sould say simply beautifull...

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Jhon Fernandis 14 December 2008

very well written i like wordings of you'r poem

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Anjali Sinha 14 December 2008

the softness of your poem the gentleness of your words the warmth with which you write the tone of your words kills me softly when i read hey amit a nice one here +++10 regards anjali

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