Miss You. Poem by shelly kiran

Miss You.

Rating: 5.0


A thousand scorpion stings I feel,
when I miss you.
A thousand lives I live,
the moment I kiss you.
Ice of Iceland melts,
frozen heart feels the pulse,
Glitter the skies more,
Diamond rain in abode of poor,
Waves dance like full moon on the shore,
A belly dancer had danced to break the floor,
The drunken lover had broken the bolted door,
Dying passion,
my lost battle,
I wish to die,
it doesn't matter,
Blue is colour of my skin,
I want the air more,
To me "my love "I feel,
heaven ‘s bliss you.

Monday, April 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss,missing you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 July 2018

A great love poem, super saturated with passion and dedication. Thanks for the sharing.10+++++ Subhas

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Chinedu Dike 28 May 2018

Beautiful love poem well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Shelly.

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 April 2018

Hi Shelly Lovely poem. Immensity of the images makes it great. And what images! ! ! Wow! Everyone stands apart. Let me quote Dying passion My lost battle I wish to die It doesn't matter..... Great! A full 10.

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Shelly Kiran 30 April 2018

Thanks Dear friend. feeling passed in flying colors.

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Carl Roussell 30 April 2018

A nice piece of writing.

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Shelly Kiran 30 April 2018

Thanks sir.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 April 2018

A thousand lives I live, the moment I kiss you. waves and full moon, iceberg. scorpions..... so many images you have used to express your romantic love. thank u dear poet. tony

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Shelly Kiran 30 April 2018

Thanks Dear poet, friend.

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