lil island Gal

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Miss You Loads - Poem by lil island Gal

Life stands still
When you’re not here.
How I wish time would speed up
Iike in old movies
Pages flying off the calendar,
Hands tearing around the clock faces,
Making it time to see you again.
Till then, I survive on little trace of you
Your scent on my photos,
Your breath warm and close
In my dreams.
I pass the time
Tracing your name with my finger
And thinking up
Just the right things to say
To make you laugh.
I look up at the stars
And picture you looking up
At the same sky too.


It’s feeling like no other,
This bittersweet longing
For everything about you
And when we’re finally together.
I wont miss another chance
To be close as a heartbeat
To you


Comments about Miss You Loads by lil island Gal

  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (1/28/2009 12:10:00 AM)

    To be close as a heart beat speaks it all. May the love god help us all.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Jitz ***** (12/13/2008 9:57:00 AM)

    you indeed conjured a beautiful image in my mind....
    the longing to be with our loved ones.
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  • Blue Eyes (11/16/2008 7:46:00 PM)

    what an image that u have drawn.i feel like living the situation.i sm touched. (Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (11/4/2008 8:13:00 PM)

    Have you got the feelings so far? ? I bet its a wonderful experience a human can get! ! ! nice piece indeed.If I could share this with you. shall I? ? ? (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (10/17/2008 9:03:00 AM)

    fine feeling of missing! the poem emitting love......10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/13/2008 6:56:00 AM)

    haha very nice sana.....when you miss someone it makes you write these lines...well done (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 20, 2008


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