Miss You So Poem by asal banu

Miss You So

Rating: 5.0


Today I gave you roses
I gave you thirty three,
one red rose for every year
that you shared with me.
as I placed them on your grave
my tears fell silently,
for the man I truly loved
who is now just a memory.
I know that those roses
will slowly wither away,
but a memory so precious
with me will always stay.
It will never ease the sadness
or the pain I've come to know,
for no matter how much time
goes by,
I will always miss you so.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 13 August 2013

beautiful love poem.the flow, rhyme are perfect and it touches the heart.nice work asal.

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Heather Wilkins 13 August 2013

lovely poem. I can relate very touching

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Asal Banu 13 August 2013

thanx Tiku I will always miss you so. :)

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Chinedu Dike 27 November 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing. Asal.

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 September 2016

Hi Asal, So painful is separation. The pain in the poem touches the hearts of the reader. Great write.

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Mousa Mohammadnia 14 August 2013

So easy and so hard and inaccessable. I love it.

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Asal Banu 14 August 2013

thanx all nice comments :) : ( ...

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Sina Farajzadeh 14 August 2013

Hi. I just read your poem and it's really nice. May God give comfort to his soul (If the adressee is dead of course) ad patience to thee... Anyway - Nice piece of poetry, I would say You're really talented. Good Luck dear.

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