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A heartfelt portrayal of hopelessness, no one able to hear your cry for help because of their own struggles and despair. Yet, you still hold on to the belief that hope will come to you through love. A poignant expression of abandonment waiting for the hope of love to save you. Has a great rhythm throughout the poem, keeps the words flowing easily. An excellent and well written poem Ambler! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Nicely written, Ambler

i hope love would get me, Because love is full of claire...i love this line. Thanks for sharing.