Missing You Poem by Sarah Everson

Missing You

Rating: 5.0


You have my hand
even without the dew,
I'd hold it to the very end of time.
Look to the sand
it trickles down for you
no hourglass can ring for us its chime.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adam Bayzer 26 December 2008

nice poem.. but i feel some thing is missing in ur text....

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Tsira Goge 22 March 2009

Sarah, it's very beautiful poems... 10, For graceful sincerity... Tsira

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Fiona Davidson 24 February 2009

This is such a powerful write Sarah...the images from it are brilliant...thank you...10++

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Awe-inspiring just awesome

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Hazem Al Jaber 31 January 2009

besutiful one dear poet.. but you hide alot between your words.. i can realize that.. well done any ways.. hazem al..

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Alison Cassidy 01 January 2009

This is elegant poetry Sarah, You choose your words with care and your metaphors too. The result is very pleasing on the eye and ear. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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