Jamelia Lane

Rookie (08/26/94 / milwaukee WI)

Missing You - Poem by Jamelia Lane

missing you is like a day with no sunshine a smile that dosent rise and plane that dosent fly
missing you is like rain that never dropp a car that dosent stop a marker with no top
missing you is like a face with a frown a person not able to calm down a queen with no crown
missing you brings tears to my eyes a butterfly that neverflies in my eyes he wetness that never dries
missing you is the pain i feel wishing it wasnt real me missing you is a huge deal
when i cry it is because i miss you and want you back
why does things have to be so black why do people have to hate
with this pain how long can i wait.


Comments about Missing You by Jamelia Lane

  • (4/13/2010 11:38:00 PM)


    I would have to disagree with the statement beneath your banner about not being a poet. I found your words and phrases entitled missing you to be poetry in the purest sense. I admire your style and wordplay very much. I will look for your name and works in the future as a result. Keep it up J.
    Marcel
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 13, 2010



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