Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

Bronze Star - 2,638 Points (8.8.1952 / Manakad)

Misuse? - Poem by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

A drunkard innocent 5
And sure an whore virgin were 7
Both the products ill- 5
The vicious insatiate use- 7
Their might the Almighty gave. 7

Comments about Misuse? by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/23/2013 9:29:00 AM)

    You have shown or marked with digit the syllable it is good to grasp pentameter or septa meter also pitch is followed soft and hard except on last it missed use of iambic...vice or virtue both are available well writ (Report) Reply

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  • Amitava Mazumdar (6/20/2013 7:36:00 AM)

    it's good to see that you can write with digits. good one (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013

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