Is she a maid?
Who is she? Answer not, said
The other;
Please tell him she! Screamed the minder;
'She is your sister'
The mocker said;
Immediately, i felt like a mister
Whose mistress sworn to never spread
Her legs to another man;
The Mocker saw me, defeated he ran;
Succinct and a good turn of phrase at the end with some drama.
Immediately, i felt like a mister The Mocker saw me, defeated he ran; very good poem. saving a girl from being.......... used by other........ you become powerful in context and jump up to save....... thank you. you are a real man. thank you. tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
excellent. keep writing. thanks