Mocker, Minder, Me: I Saw A Maid I Knowth Not Poem by Egwu Collins

Mocker, Minder, Me: I Saw A Maid I Knowth Not

Rating: 4.3


Is she a maid?
Who is she? Answer not, said
The other;
Please tell him she! Screamed the minder;

'She is your sister'
The mocker said;
Immediately, i felt like a mister
Whose mistress sworn to never spread
Her legs to another man;
The Mocker saw me, defeated he ran;

Sunday, June 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: maid,sister
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madhabi Banerjee 17 June 2017

excellent. keep writing. thanks

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Raymond Farrell 16 June 2017

Succinct and a good turn of phrase at the end with some drama.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 June 2017

Immediately, i felt like a mister The Mocker saw me, defeated he ran; very good poem. saving a girl from being.......... used by other........ you become powerful in context and jump up to save....... thank you. you are a real man. thank you. tony

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