With Wit Will Water Walk Poem by Egwu Collins

With Wit Will Water Walk

Rating: 4.3


With Wit Will Water Walk.
Thou art more answerable.
Not even the gods can talk
Against him, nor manly efforts considerable.

The pundits criticize.
But not in thou own eyes recognise.
Nor lose possession of that drive thou ow'st.
Birds fly, dogs bark, he rants, he know'st.

The media talk against, the media fault find.
But to the path he has chosen, thou not relentless.
Rather thou art more continu'st.
As long as man can eat, so lives him unchanged.
As long as man can talk​, so lives him with luck.

Saturday, December 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: america,government,trump
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
it is impossible for water to walk.even though it gathers all the intelligence about walking it won't still walk.Water symbolizes theopposition against trump, while walk symbolises the possibility of them winning in with their opposition. Opposition against trump won't surpress trump's ideology.The title "With Wit Will Water Walk " has a simple answer and it is a no, that is how the opposition cannot stop trump's​ views.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 10 December 2017

Thou art more answerable. Not even the gods can talk Water symbolizes the opposition against trump, while walk symbolises the possibility of them winning in with their opposition .... you have a powerful mind which observes at your young age....... become like obama..... you have the potential dear poet...... tony

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Tom Billsborough 10 December 2017

I agree with Adrian that you have a very good sense of rhythm. I guess you are right about Trump and his red-neck views, sadly. Think you have genuine talent, Egwu. Will read some more soon.

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Adrian Flett 09 December 2017

I like the line not even the gods can talk. The rhythm in the stanzas is good. Remember the media can be a good balance and check on power.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 09 December 2017

Some times its better to educate the mass and not the authority

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