Modern Day Robinson Crusoe Comments

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great story. cant say more than i think its great! al

A momentary daydream for your privileged reader. Superb. t x

Like the way you've refined this, the nautical imagery and language serve their purpose well and mislead the reader to the end. Particularly like the image you created of 'the sea of cars rolling past'. Justine

Charles, based on your humor, I'm more inclined to read it as a modern day Gilligan's Island. Good write! ! Brian

A worthy post, Chuck, this delightful surprise and contrast of types of shipwrecks. The poem has a piquant feel to it. Nice expansion on your poetry-in-motion piece. Well done - love it! Est : ]

Sweet write Charles, civilization huh? I think you better stay put! lol Smiling at you, Tai