Moment In The Sky

feeling the right thank left
hearing how they stumble
seeing their state in wind
knowing they're out on calls

each time i go around
i pick up something new
even if i don't know what it is
i still pick it up
always in hope
that it will guild me more
and grant me
with just a brush
so i could paint you a rainbow
Friday, August 29, 2008
'The true path holds few and very gratifying rainbows, to be cherished for the all of ones life.' -Nagourta
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Seema Chowdhury 11 October 2008
so i could paint you a rainbow...... very catchy and thought provoking.
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Ben Gieske 16 September 2008
I think the title is very fitting and goes well with the ending “so I could paint you a rainbow”. The poem leaves the intended reader with a very nice thought. I am not able to fathom the meaning of the first four lines and its connection with the rest of the poem. “Feeling the right thank” - This doesn’t make any sense to me. What are you thinking about? If I knew who “they” are, maybe I would see the complete picture.
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