Moments Poem by Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)

Moments

Rating: 4.0


Let's lie along the tall grass
within the bush
with our backs,
our heads faced to the sky
with minds, yours and mine
the souls we share
continue to storm our emotions

Let's lie
Along the tall grass of the bush
With our hands held
And so likewise
Our hearts will be joint

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pheko Motaung 20 June 2012

A fantastic poem! You're wonderful at such moments when you write great love poems!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 17 June 2012

explains the simple pleasure derived at the moments of our life! Nice..

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Eric Cockrell 16 June 2012

this one has the power of two souls entwined...

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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