Monsoon Musings 02 - Me Too Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Monsoon Musings 02 - Me Too

Rating: 5.0


Under cover of dark blankets
Are the skies above
Me too...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Monsoon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 September 2020

Fabulous visual. Thought provoking! ........10

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 September 2020

Thank you, Geeta. Loved your words of appreciation. Obliged.

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Rebecca Navarre 19 November 2018

I started out to say how beautifully and powerfully painted, and then noticed below about the fevers.. I am sorry to hear this! .. Ever so many blessings! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 November 2018

During monsoon, the skies are covered by dark rain clouds, for which I have used a metaphor of warm blankets. During childhood, simple cold and fever used to be a regular story for me during every monsoon, which I enjoyed....I could escape schools... wonderful childhood.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 June 2018

dark blankets as symbol...........i take it like that..... then me too........ thank u dear poet for telling so much in few words.. tony

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 June 2018

Thank you Dr Tony. Sure, they stand for the monsoon clouds... On the offset of monsoon, all kinds infections spread. Especially, fever. And when affected by fever, we cover ourselves tight with blanket. And, the sky covers herself in the blankets of clouds. Is she running fever too?

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Rini shibu 20 June 2018

Dark clouds and upcoming rains, well penned

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 June 2018

Yes, Rini. Dark clouds speak of Rains in the offing. And rains bring fever. Just thought, sky could be no exception....

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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