03 A Grain Of Rice Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

03 A Grain Of Rice

Rating: 4.6


A grain of rice
Alone
In the cooking pot
Cries, 'I wish
I could get out! '

I wish I could get out
Of this cooking pot
With the entire waters
Of The Flood,
Nay, Styx drained
Enough to drown
The Universe
And the infernal fire under it.

03 A Grain Of Rice
Tuesday, June 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: songs of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In the pic is A view of the left half of the Gangotri Group in the Western Himalayas from Pauri, part of which is seen on the left.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 01 June 2022

Wonderful imagination... many congratulations dear poet. Top score.

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My sincerest thanks, Dilipji. Obliged

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I am grateful to you, Dilipji.

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Is it the formidable longing of an escapist?

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Santhi Janardanan 27 February 2024

Craving freesome with the fire inside! Superb

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Ancient man has tried to find answers to the intrigues posed by life. Thank you dear poet..

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A fig of imagination and a glimpse of an ancient culture

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Sarojkanta Dash 27 October 2023

the poem vividly depicts the yearning for freedom, even in the face of overwhelming odds. The imagery of the rice grain and the dramatic wish for escape evoke a powerful sense of longing. a good one.

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The yearning for total freedom from all shackles, is the inherent longing in all forms of life. More so, humans.. Thank you, dear poet.

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Poet Magadha Rani has added this poem to her favourites. Thank you Dear Poet Magadha for faving this poem

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