03 A Grain Of Rice Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

03 A Grain Of Rice

Rating: 4.6


A grain of rice
Alone
In the cooking pot
Cries, 'I wish
I could get out! '

I wish I could get out
Of this cooking pot
With the entire waters
Of The Flood,
Nay, Styx drained
Enough to drown
The Universe
And the infernal fire under it.

03 A Grain Of Rice
Tuesday, June 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: songs of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In the pic is A view of the left half of the Gangotri Group in the Western Himalayas from Pauri, part of which is seen on the left.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 01 June 2022

Wonderful imagination... many congratulations dear poet. Top score.

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My sincerest thanks, Dilipji. Obliged

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

***** and.....to 'my favorites', wherever THEY are kept. Are they kept? WHERE? ? ? bri : )

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

Styx: 'there are multiple rivers named Styx, including rivers in Alabama, Ohio, and Oregon (states in the USA) . Also: In Greek mythology, Styx also called the River Styx, is a goddess and river of the Underworld.'

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Proserpina, the Roman Goddess (Persephone among the Greek Goddesses) is the Goddess of Spring as well as the Underworld. Why both Spring and Underworld are entrusted with the same Goddess? Any guess, Bri?

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

'The Flood', .....Noah's (and maybe everyone else's) flood in the Bible? ? ? Just a 'story' I think, but I enjoyed it as a child (the story, not the flood) .

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As a child, you should have enjoyed the flood too, Bri 😝 Hehehe!

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

I paused at the ending, staring at the last two lines. Then I let out a gentle laugh. I also figured that the 'flame' was probably there to boil the water.

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

Are you, Unnikrishnan S. M., in the photo? I think I may see you.... a bit to the left of center. Why....I've eaten rice grains larger than this poem ***** & a favorite.

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Rice is the staple food (source of carbohydrates) of the people in Garhwal (Uttarakhand India) , Utterpradesh, Kerala, Tamizhnad, Karnataka, Andhra etc

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