Monsoon Musings 04 - Chatter Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Monsoon Musings 04 - Chatter

Rating: 5.0


Chatter

Outside the window
Rain goddess
Chatters loud.
In my drawing room
Suarez scores a goal
Against Sa Udi Arabia

Wednesday, June 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: rains,soccer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Monsoon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 November 2020

I remember to have read and written a comment on this Monsoon Musing 4, but i do not see my comment here. Well, no worries! The poem is a picture of opposites - a reflection of dual aspects of life! What is outside is not what is inside, though both make a loud sounds - a common factor - the chatter. Beautifully penned Unni! .....5 Stars

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 November 2020

Thank you Geeta, for the lovely post. Very true, it is, the chatter of the rain and the roar of crowd in the tv have the same reverberations

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 September 2019

A marvelous short write. Rain has been described beautifully mingled with an information about a wonderful game; soccer.

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 September 2019

Thank you. I am a football fan. So, these lines came so easily...thank you for your appreciation. Obliged.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 December 2018

An interesting poem on soccer and rainy days! .. Beautifully expressed! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 December 2018

Hi Becca, On the day, rather night, of the key Soccer match, it was raining here in Kerala. Of course, it was Monsoon. And, I am a fan of soccer. So..... Thank you Becca for your appreciation. This poem has come from the spur of the mome.. Thank you for all those tens..

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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