Thursday, September 18, 2008
Monster Of The Sea Comments
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The monster of the sea once more rears her ugly head
She rushes in once more to terrorize, to drink the blood of the dead
Will totally envelop all within her her reach, she stays till all is gone
Washing into the sea all life, winds howling her horror song
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3/15/2026 7:09:57 PM # 1.0.0
Dear Donna Nimmo, you have a talent, imagination and sensitivity. Enough for one to write good poems. I give to your poem a grade of 8+. If you have omitted the last paragraph completely the grade would be 10. Why? Because you have changed the direction, the main target, sewarching for a second. Your target was to stop at: 'In this fight with this monster, we know she wins / But maybe we have time, once more before her ugly head spins' giving a great hope and a signal for the others to keep on fighting the ugly monster, whatever the resuld would be. You are a gifted poet..but first think strategically each one of yoour poems. Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Int.Lib.Poetry awarded