Moon- Harvest Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Moon- Harvest

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To feel a home away from home
my friend miles apart impassioned
to her query from the other side of sea
for love epithet tinkling sui-generis.

'when moon shines full to its brim
a star sequeastered in a distant horizon
blinks to the soigne red rose on looking
for a unsung love of being cuddled within.

whispering the petals of lovely red rose
to sprinkle the songs of beauty eclectic
on to the plexus of moon star & rose transcended
whence the' harvest-moon' appeals syncretism

when fragrance be overwhelmmed
lest be not someone blemished & dying
for the wishful love be epitomised
foliage be stuck into the autumn for a while.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julie Schleppegrell 05 June 2012

Dr Subhenda, Words in Moon-Harvest are perfectly written, I related to the words in heart. Thank you for this. Julie

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Louie Limosani 10 June 2008

You have a way with words Dr Kar and a deep thinker. Each sentence is carefully constructed and not rushed. Your languge in you're poems is of high intellect. A lot of aspiring poets tend to rush their work, a good poem is like building a house or a jigsaw puzzle it takes time. I look forward to reading more of you're poems Dr Kar Kind regards Louie

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Pia Andersson 05 August 2007

45996115585833 moonflowers to you for writing this poem! ! Wishing you joy Pia

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Lillian J. 02 July 2007

Lovely write, very passionate. Lilly :)

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Vallerie Lobell 01 July 2007

oh the moon always brings a sense of longing....really enjoyed the last line to 'be stuck into the autumn for awhile'....great poem....Vallerie

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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