Dónall Dempsey

Veteran Poet - 1,356 Points (15/07/56 / Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.)

Moonlight & Frost - Poem by Dónall Dempsey

I breathe upon
the window pane

leaving a kiss
that frosts

You do the same.

I kiss your kiss
of frost.

You kiss

We leave
kisses all over the window

The frost now
reclaiming them

taking them back
into the night

as the humans
(being only human)

continue on
in their dreams.

Comments about Moonlight & Frost by Dónall Dempsey

  • (6/26/2008 5:10:00 PM)

    Cold Lips,
    Warm Heart...
    Warm Hands,
    Cold Heart!

    How quaintly and delicately you put this, but please remeber this - A KISS IS JUST A KISS? Your tender way of telling about such a moment is perfect, just perfect!
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  • (6/16/2008 10:38:00 AM)

    This is a wonderfully delicate picture. i love it.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 16, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, July 7, 2008

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