More Can You Fit On It's Pin Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

More Can You Fit On It's Pin

Rating: 5.0


As you breath it,
it rewinds your stars,
again.
The comets fly as tears you void,
though you renew them,
as time renews your start.
You must indure, Your fate,
as such,
planets slam into you,
to fill the void inside.

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wise poem... poetry beautifully penned..10++++ You must indure, Your fate, as such, planets slam into you, to fill the void inside.

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Carol Gall 04 June 2009

poem full of sadness but there is hope iip

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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