More Reality Poem by David Knox

More Reality



look over the shade
look no more accolades
no more its about over
its about time to step out of the rover
we aint on the moon
this is no cartoon
this is real
the read deal
lets see if you take it
maybe someone has their own tree
and its not me
heh wow this hasnt happened yet
and yet it has and now my mind is wet
with thoughts of how
why and why i want some chow
i guess this work makes me hungry
for knowledge of those big questions
hmmm how fey
no reason to inveigh
ok this never happened forget it already.....
forget it forget it..... no dream no scream
reality that causes fatalitliy
go back to sleep and wake
up and see nothing but a lil shake
that stimulates ur senses shhhhhhh
dont move its not what you think forget it

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aine Ní Leidhin 30 October 2007

Hello David I really like this verse and think that reality is subjective. 'Nowadays we are 'presented' with reality but is the only reality human life AND the environment it Habbi tats. Keeping it real without technical tricks is a major task in the 21st century. Kind regards Aine

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