Mosquito Poem by Bridgid Patrick

Mosquito

Rating: 5.0


Deciding to feast on my dozing head
Meant waking me up, and winding up dead
My standard reaction when bit on the noggin'
Is to retaliate with a vigorous flogging
Upset, disoriented, near-sighted, and sore
Crouched in my underwear at a quarter to four
If you hadn't buzzed about my ear
I'd still be asleep and you'd still be here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 27 June 2014

Sleep made an alliance with the mosquito against us.

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Max Reif 25 February 2006

This is funny, Bridgid! You do comic rhyme well!

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Cj Heck 24 February 2006

(laughing) This is adorable, Bridgid! A ten from me! ! Warmest regards, CJ

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