Mosquitoes Complained Poem by Ray Lucero

Mosquitoes Complained

Rating: 5.0


One day a swarm of mosquitoes complained to God

“Lord God we must protest! ”

“What is it My Children? ”

“We want You to still the Wind”

“Why? ”

“Because the Wind scatters our swarm”

“Ah I See”…God summoned the Wind

Within moments Wind arrived

God Spoke, “Wind, the mosquitoes have brought suit”

Wind replied “Where are my accusers? ”

'Gone…lost within thee Wind'

So it is when Seekers dispute God’s Creation

ROTMS

(Inspired by the brilliance of Rumi)

Wednesday, January 9, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: god,wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 27 June 2014

Wow this poem is different in an amazing way.you just defied the boundaries of poetry, well done Ray

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Atsiylah Garfinkel 18 January 2008

Fantastic and witty! 10/10!

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