Before reluctant sun arose
one summer’s morn,
Her lithe, naked body
lay next to me
On downy pillow her flaxen
locks did adorn,
Heated passion thru me rushed
“Oh, sweet agony”
Hungry hands explored the
fullness of her landscape,
I felt the roundness of her breasts
a nipple I did pinch
Ere long, my veiled heart
she’d soon undrape,
She moaned a sigh of pleasure,
and gave a subtle flinch
Two bodies conjoined in bliss
all else did fade away,
Earth nor God Himself
would dare interfere
I in her, her in me
our love we'd not betray,
Our sacred act felt no guilt
as finish then grew near
'15 minutes of ecstasy' as
two lovers fulfilled as one
She morphed into nights Silver Moon,
and I the Central Sun
This metaphor is draped with quite a creative surprise, still romantically breathtaking all the same. Quite the clever muse with a charming twist of uniqueness, for sure. Brilliantly romantic~! ~Milly
Filled with passion.Intimate in a tasteful way Patricia Gale
Beautifully done Ray, tender and nice, Moyax
Another good one from Ray, who is quickly becoming a favorite. And boy, does it ever capture the essence of those moments of ecstasy that are all too rare in most of our lives - and thus all the more precious as well. Bravo!
! 5 minutes, tell me your secret. me I'm a one minute man. I know, it's sad.
Ray, A very sensual write. May I share with you my 'Poem Erotica' Robert
it takes two make a completer entity my friend
This was beautiful, I loved it! Wonderful job!
Beautiful, absolutly beautiful...........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Oh how magically some are so blessed by God; this was elaborately majestic, with a real romantic flair. Brilliantly ascribe, well done~!