rinki nandy

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Mother - Poem by rinki nandy

Lost i am when i don't have you by my side, i owe myself to you and this life,
i know there exits God and it sure is in you, i am so blessed to have you in my life,
wish i don't live to see you gone, wish i am there for you when you are alone.
Lost is my pain when a see your pretty face, i see no gain in striving without a smile on that face,
selfish i was and i am to leave you, you said it is for good i couldn't believe you,
you promised “i will always be beside you”.


The greatest ever are you, a promise keeper is my mother,
as i grow older, look over my shoulder and see you clearer.....my life is my mother.
You are there always and everywhere, wherever i go you are with me,
just like the air i breathe, surrounding me....protecting me....forever you are with me.
I love you till infinity, in you i see the divinity.

May the years from my life be added to yours,
may the fears from your life be added to mine,
please never leave me, God please don't take the love of mine,
may you live forever and always shine.


Comments about Mother by rinki nandy

  • (11/21/2010 5:54:00 AM)


    Kudos to your writing. The poem is full of vivid imagery and enough depth. A strong emotion runs through the whole poem.
    The poem depicts your love to your mother.
    Nice write.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/19/2010 7:34:00 PM)


    Lost i am when i don't have you by my side, i owe myself to you and this life,
    i know there exits God and it sure is in you, i am so blessed to have you in my life, ..........................so profound words and feeling for mother..great feeling for a sacred and divine figure for us in our life. i literally cried while writing poem and in turn so many readers replied me that they wept while reading poem 'o, mother' read and reread it..i was so much moved by he spirit.of wore mother thanks for sharing powerful poem.....10

    read mine..o.mother....mom i miss you...mom i cry eventoday
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 19, 2009



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