Mother Poem by Sreelakshmi Revikumar

Mother

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In the womb in you,
I budded and flowered.
The kicks of my legs
Made you awake.
The agony paved for joy,
I rested in your nest.

On your tender breast,
Slept I, as your child.
With caring arms, you-
Saved me from ghosts.
My goddess was you
As I was taught anew.

In the ocean of your care,
I flowed, my mother!
You fed me when I'm weak
And thus made me strong.
Honey was poured by words,
As you cared me day and night.

All my quarrels and truffles ended
By the touch of your hands.
You stepped up with care
And you became my mother.

Wednesday, December 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: agony,birth,care,joy,life,love,love and life,mother,mother and child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 14 December 2018

A mother's love has no parallel on Earth! The relationship between the mother and child begins even before birth, from the very moment of conception! A child grows under the protective wings of its mother, being led and directed by her in every turn of life! A mother's love is beautifully presented here!

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Prabir Gayen 16 February 2019

In the ocean of your care, I flowed, my mother! You fed me when I'm weak And thus made me strong. Honey was poured by words, As you cared me day and night... ....a very sensitive stanza.... thanks

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 21 February 2019

It's a pleasure to hear from you. Mother's care cannot be explained completely. I tried my best to get a part of her emotions. But it still seems insufficient before her love

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Prabir Gayen 16 February 2019

Autoplay next video In the womb in you, I budded and flowered. The kicks of my legs Made you awake. The agony paved for joy, I rested in your nest..... beautiful lines

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 21 February 2019

I feel happy to hear such encouraging words from you dear friend...

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 February 2019

INside the womb, on your tender, in your hands, loving and caring, in your eyes i grew up to be what i am.. i love this poem.. Mother is next to God for all of us. thank u. tony

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 21 February 2019

Mother is the god who guides us no matter of our actions. Their kindness have no limits. Thank you for your time in your effort to read my poem dear Tony

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Srijita Mondal 15 February 2019

Very beautiful poem..each line is filled with tender feelings of Love and emotion for Mother.. Parents' love is the deepest Love on Earth

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Ramesh Rai 14 December 2018

Simply I can say Soulful write. Keep it up.

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Sreelakshmi 14 December 2018

Thanks a lot for encouraging me

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