Mystery Clouds Poem by Sreelakshmi Revikumar

Mystery Clouds

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It forms shapes and puzzles
Which still create a wonder.
Horses and dragons they create,
Puffed up like snow.

On days, goes they missing,
Filling the sky with blue;
It extends till the horizon,
With nothing yet to dream.

By then, the clouds are back-
Getting more playful.
They cover the sun at times,
Sudden shower otherwise.

Where do they go, these forms,
So mysteriously made?
Maybe to the nearby village,
Having tales to say.

Mystery Clouds
Thursday, November 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,imagination,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Mystery of the clouds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 09 March 2019

Where do they go, these forms, So mysteriously made? Maybe to the nearby village, Having tales to say.... beautiful.

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Thanks a lot

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Cigeng Zhang 19 February 2019

Clouds are really magical.In the poet's eye, like horses, dragon, and snow...haveing tales to say - as you poemed in your work. Beautiful.I enjoyed your piece.

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 21 February 2019

It's a pleasure to hear from you Cizeng. I got the same feel from your poem bubbles

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Srijita Mondal 15 February 2019

Your poem reminds me of my childhood days..thank you for sharing such a lovely poem

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 15 February 2019

Childhood days are memorable throughout our life. Thanks for reading my poem.

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Prabir Gayen 13 December 2018

Very good poem on cloud....thanks

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 13 December 2018

Thanks for letting me know

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Ramesh Rai 02 December 2018

Very unique poems. Perhaps no one had imagined the shape of cloud. Nicely penned. I wonder how did you get such beautiful conception. Wish you all the best. Keep writing.

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Sreelakshmi 02 December 2018

Imagination creates wonders. Thanks for your comments

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