Mother Poem by swati sharma

Mother

Rating: 4.7


God can't be every where
so that he has made a mother
the true love is only her love
her love is on all above

she wakes each and every night
just to make us sleep
she makes us happy every time
whenever we weep

you are a great gift for me
I should be thankful to God
for giving you to me
I think I am a luckiest child
who have your love not living wild

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
in this poem I am telling that how our mothers takes care of us
how much difficulties she have to face.
this is a tribute to all the mothers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohit Sharma 03 July 2013

dear jenie franksay if u think therz grammatical mistake so u will also find mistake in william shakespeare coz poem is full of feeling grammar doesn't matters and i love this poem at the age of 14 writing poem is simply super

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Allan Van Der Meulen 03 July 2013

Many people do not truely understand the sacrifices our parents make. I salute you

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Jenie Franksay 03 July 2013

Good verse..... but you need to work a bit on your grammar. I invite you to read and comment on my poems.

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Vishal Sharma 03 July 2013

great rhythm and pure flow keep your head high

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Swati Sharma 03 July 2013

thanku allan mohit and jenie

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Swati Sharma 10 July 2013

thankyou so much Doug bentley

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Doug Bentley 09 July 2013

You have a gift. Never stop writing.

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Swati Sharma 04 July 2013

thankyou khairul ashan

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Khairul Ahsan 04 July 2013

A nice tribute to all mothers of the world. Nice poem, well expressed. The last two lines are beautiful.

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Swati Sharma 04 July 2013

thank you Vizard Dhawan

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