Mountain Climbing Poem by Barry Middleton

Mountain Climbing

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so near the mountain peak
that I can see the top
I must continue on
I know I cannot stop

yes I am tired and old
it's tempting to turn back
the prize is often found
far off the beaten track

and so I ease my pace
as old men have to do
I want to breathe the air
reserved for just a few

I only pause for night
to rest my weary head
I'll make it to the top
and not give in to dread

as earth and sky are wise
and point the surest way
to lead me to the clouds
forever there to stay

Mountain Climbing
Tuesday, February 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,journey,life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 15 February 2017

The mount of life seen out of the point of its last part so nicely and couragely.

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Barry Middleton 15 February 2017

That's it. Thanks for reading and commenting Dimitrios.

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Elena Sandu 14 February 2017

Lovely poem, thank you for sharing! Such a gorgeously beautiful picture, I guess such moment as standing on the mountain's peak may be one the most treasure moments in one's life how awesome!

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Barry Middleton 14 February 2017

That is literally quite true. I hope the top of the metaphorical mountain is even better. Thanks for the comment.

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Bill Cantrell 14 February 2017

Great job! Lead me to the clouds, forever there to stay.

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Barry Middleton 14 February 2017

Thanks Bill. Glad you liked it. I can see the Promised Land! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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