A Baker sowed a muffin bush
it sprang sweet scents tothe Hindu Kush
it had choclate chips
with cherry red tips
and tops so plush to knock your tush
Edward Leer should feel proud, his heritage has been preserved well.
A beautifully crafted and properly executed limerick. A write meant to be funny like this one. Great rhyming throughout this fun poem.
Thank you so much Rose Marie, its always a privlidge to receive a comment from you, it was something I wrote in a hurry, just for fun. Cant wait to read what new works you have brewing.
Amusing expression. Beautiful Limerick with humor and nice theme. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks so much Kumarmani, your words mean a lot! I tried to amuse without appearing to be rude. Looking forward to what works you have in store.
Sometimes poetry takes one back in time. There is a sense of nostalgia. Then again, poetry and art can draw from one a sense of latent, buried youth. This is not nostalgia. Reading this gem, I feel young again. magnificent, Kevin.
I'm glad it inspired that feeling from you Mj, to tell you the truth I never really thought this silly little thing could do that. Its interesting when you write something how people react to it, in ways you didn't think could. Best wishes!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is at once imaginative, cool and very funny! True to the spirit of a limerick! A 10