Muffin Bush (Limerick) Poem by Kevin Patrick

Muffin Bush (Limerick)

Rating: 5.0


A Baker sowed a muffin bush
it sprang sweet scents tothe Hindu Kush
it had choclate chips
with cherry red tips
and tops so plush to knock your tush

Friday, July 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: silly
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 22 August 2019

This is at once imaginative, cool and very funny! True to the spirit of a limerick! A 10

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 July 2019

Edward Leer should feel proud, his heritage has been preserved well.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 July 2019

A beautifully crafted and properly executed limerick. A write meant to be funny like this one. Great rhyming throughout this fun poem.

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Kevin Patrick 26 July 2019

Thank you so much Rose Marie, its always a privlidge to receive a comment from you, it was something I wrote in a hurry, just for fun. Cant wait to read what new works you have brewing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2019

Amusing expression. Beautiful Limerick with humor and nice theme. Thanks for sharing.

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Kevin Patrick 26 July 2019

Thanks so much Kumarmani, your words mean a lot! I tried to amuse without appearing to be rude. Looking forward to what works you have in store.

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Mj Lemon 18 July 2019

Sometimes poetry takes one back in time. There is a sense of nostalgia. Then again, poetry and art can draw from one a sense of latent, buried youth. This is not nostalgia. Reading this gem, I feel young again. magnificent, Kevin.

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Kevin Patrick 26 July 2019

I'm glad it inspired that feeling from you Mj, to tell you the truth I never really thought this silly little thing could do that. Its interesting when you write something how people react to it, in ways you didn't think could. Best wishes!

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