Tuesday, April 7, 2015

Murder Comments

Rating: 5.0

Language must suffice.

Years ago,
under a sweet June sky
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David Baker
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Romella Kitchens 07 March 2023

Another excellent poem. The line breaks are aggressive and daring. The line breaks build the suspense and imagery. Tinge of humor but not adverse to a basic narrative. The natural setting makes the piece have a predatory, instinctual man/woman appeal. Brilliant.

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Kelly Kurt 07 April 2015

Wonderful poem, David. Well thought out and worded

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