topaz africa

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Murderer - Poem by topaz africa

thoughts of you running through my mind
confusion clouds my thinking
thoughts of deception are attacking
suicide keeps ringing in my head
i feel alone
lonelyness wraps its self around me
i keep seeing this question
how long will it take for me to get the answer
it seems as if you've played with my emotins
i wish for things to be clear
all my visions are fuzzy
the sun in my life has gone
you have killed the person that i am

Comments about Murderer by topaz africa

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/2/2008 8:42:00 AM)

    love is pain and pleasure............treasure it. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/15/2007 9:26:00 PM)

    I love this poem........friends can be exactly the same, as I found out just today. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/24/2006 1:55:00 AM)

    Some lovers like murderers.
    And some like saints.
    But sometimes saints become murderers
    And murderers become saints
    Yonela I see the frustration in your fine poem which accompanies on this journey?

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  • (10/18/2006 6:03:00 AM)

    A very disheartening poem Yonela.
    I like it on a personal note.....

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 18, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 20, 2010

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