Murderer Poem by topaz africa

Murderer

Rating: 3.5


thoughts of you running through my mind
confusion clouds my thinking
thoughts of deception are attacking
suicide keeps ringing in my head
i feel alone
lonelyness wraps its self around me
i keep seeing this question
how long will it take for me to get the answer
it seems as if you've played with my emotins
i wish for things to be clear
all my visions are fuzzy
the sun in my life has gone
you have killed the person that i am

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 April 2008

love is pain and pleasure............treasure it.

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Amie-Lee ...... 15 October 2007

I love this poem........friends can be exactly the same, as I found out just today.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 24 October 2006

Some lovers like murderers. And some like saints. But sometimes saints become murderers And murderers become saints Yonela I see the frustration in your fine poem which accompanies on this journey?

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Joshua Fegley 18 October 2006

A very disheartening poem Yonela. I like it on a personal note..... Laters.....

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