Mutual Predators Poem by Dorothy Kardas, Psy.D. Th.D.

Mutual Predators



the echo of fierce tongue lives in my brain
years have passed, still, stain remains stain
the fulsome ally childishly involved in mutual game
to blame the truth teller in defense of disown shame

what uttered with the right intent of correction
time and again changed into self-serving direction
with undue suspicions, alterations, fabrications
to attain illusory sway in trifling, frivolous fray

in appeasing the indignant, uncandid and shaky
generous giving took shape of powerless measure
trust impaired in the service of imaginary pleasure
the richly offered chance turned to be abated treasure

friends to intricate schemes, sneaky secrets
engaged in intrigues, devoid of fitting regrets,
censuring the well-wisher, while excusing own guilt
uphill terrain to wipe out what mazily - cunningly built

setting up impossible task - tying down hands
by imposing self-centered, fickle demands...
benumbed by detraction, poisoned attack
paralyzed by senseless stab in the back...

Saturday, June 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: failure,relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Beckhart 28 June 2016

You nailed it again Doc! Everyone reading this powerfully written poem can relate to it. It brings out all sorts of emotions & that's what great poetry is all about! Great summary of main factors involved in painful & failed relationships. When there's misunderstanding of good intentions, unfair criticism, two-faced dealings, the trust is destroyed & relationship lost. Love the ending. Doc you are always full of surprises. Just amazing!

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Kelly Kurt 25 June 2016

A wonderfully written piece, Dorothy

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