Monday, November 10, 2008

My Coffee Cup Comments

Rating: 5.0

My coffee cup
Lives with the guy next door
While he's making coffee
I go out to explore
...
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Debora Soramaki
COMMENTS
Howard Johnson 10 November 2008

A true reading pleasure, It made me a little hungry , Debora, Thank you for sharing,

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Joseph Poewhit 10 November 2008

Nothing like that cup of java

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 10 November 2008

Spontaneity and linearity in a fine poem story. At the moment for a good use of nostalgia one would go to America rather than Naples (the coffee break is famous in the Vesusius's town, you know) .

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C T Heart 10 November 2008

fine narration of the taste and aroma of a cup of coffee...Nicely penned.

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