My Craze Kingdom Poem by true little angel

My Craze Kingdom

Rating: 4.7


destroy my craze kingdom...
damage it...
Kill my reckless dreams
one by one...
leave me there
between its remains
drawing a picture of your grudge
on the sand,
using my wounds blood
and my tears...
Don't care! !
Don't mind! !
i'll be o'right
as the sun promised
to shine....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iron Panda 23™ 02 March 2010

greatnesss! ! ! ^-^

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Lindani Mahlangu 30 December 2009

Ur style of writing reminds me of Shakesperian style, da W.Shakespear style of writing, u a 1 of top poets little 1, dnt gv up, keep writing, enjoy, cheers

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Blue Eyes 30 October 2009

it is a ver good poem.i enjoyed it a lot.

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beautiful poem, well written little angel

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