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I'M Still Dying.....!

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i'm still dying

i'm dying
in that dark corner
beyond their eyes
frozen under fears
and false impression
of ice

i'm dying
on this dreadful night
in silent fight
between my mind and my heart
to find what must be right

i'm dying
my hands are ice-cold
with full weakness
and i'm no longer bold
to face a hurting scaring world

i'm dying
my soul is trying
to get out
of my body
of my cells
and then crying
releasing a loud broken shout

and now my soul
becomes cool
trying to sleep
in gloomy pool
of silence, endlessly deep

but still i'm dying.....! ! ! ! !
Sunday, March 1, 2009
Iron Panda 23™ 02 March 2010
10! ! :)
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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 30 December 2009
That's a wonderful piece of work to die for :)
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Lindani Mahlangu 29 December 2009
Stanza 4, so touching, keep up da pace, u are wow, true little 1, caring Lee ndani
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Honest Heart 14 March 2009
oh, very moving! ! ! ....great....great...keeeeeeeeeeeep writing my dear :)
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anurag duggal 09 March 2009
a very poignant poem why so much pain.........lovely write anyways
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Hazem Al Jaber 01 March 2009
its an natrually feelings that what you hide inside your heart, , its a worries that worrying you from a facing betyween you and your heart.. so beautiful dear sweet girl, , hazem
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