true little angel

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I'M Still Dying.....! - Poem by true little angel

i'm still dying


i'm dying
in that dark corner
beyond their eyes
frozen under fears
and false impression
of ice

i'm dying
on this dreadful night
in silent fight
between my mind and my heart
to find what must be right

i'm dying
my hands are ice-cold
shivering
with full weakness
and i'm no longer bold
to face a hurting scaring world

i'm dying
my soul is trying
to get out
of my body
of my cells
and then crying
releasing a loud broken shout

and now my soul
becomes cool
trying to sleep
in gloomy pool
of silence, endlessly deep

but still i'm dying.....! ! ! ! !


Comments about I'M Still Dying.....! by true little angel

  • (3/2/2010 7:13:00 AM)

    10! ! :) (Report)Reply

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  • (12/30/2009 5:47:00 AM)

    That's a wonderful piece of work to die for :) (Report)Reply

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  • (12/29/2009 1:57:00 PM)

    Stanza 4, so touching, keep up da pace, u are wow, true little 1,

    caring Lee ndani
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  • (12/26/2009 3:11:00 PM)

    great linez, great purpose, great wordz, well organized, interesting, hell. what doesn't it have? ? (Report)Reply

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  • (3/14/2009 12:32:00 PM)

    oh, very moving! ! ! ....great....great...keeeeeeeeeeeep writing my dear :) (Report)Reply

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  • (3/9/2009 4:07:00 AM)

    a very poignant poem why so much pain.........lovely write anyways (Report)Reply

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  • Hazem Al Jaber (3/1/2009 5:52:00 AM)

    its an natrually feelings that what you hide inside your heart, , its a worries that worrying you from a facing betyween you and your heart..
    so beautiful dear sweet girl, ,
    hazem
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 1, 2009


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