My Eternal Say Poem by RUP POKHAREL

My Eternal Say

Rating: 5.0


I am from a rich land
I am rich. Have no reach either-
Man from blessed land. I feel myself great.
Nature has her treasury stored,
“Last Paradise on earth” all say.
Fragrance from the colored hills,
Breeze carrying aroma from valleys harvest
Has made my land cloud nine
Rare lakes and ample rivers-
Oh! Speaks in my land,
Sing songs calling unity in diversity.
Sad to hark back to- peaks are lost
Glacier caries their mourning tears
Thank God. Rivers are still ours.
Having born on rich land
Have still live pride within
Of course, legs are at far
Searching a track to reach and share kisses
Have cared for will to make parade of my obligation.
I do have just a wish
To add a building brick over cracked roads
I do have just a wish
I am born and own my little space there
To use it make my graveyard
For my progeny may have pride whereupon,
Could trace a reminiscence
Of once hard lived time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 13 September 2009

And how blessed are you, to make that eternal say.

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Indira Babbellapati 20 September 2009

a very sensitive emotion expressed here, rup....wherever one travels one always wishes to die on one's own land!

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C. P. Sharma 16 September 2009

Beautiful poem. But why bring about discordance of duality at the end, why make a graveyard of briks in it. lol CP

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Reshma Ramesh 16 September 2009

beautiful......well done

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Winnie Angel 13 September 2009

Blessed is that you! and a very thankful heart to feel the same....Winnie

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there is a poet in me! 13 September 2009

a good poem....... thanks.... a 10++

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