my fair lilly
i look at you
and i see a gem unknown,
a glistining star in a lonely sky
lighting my world
i gaze at you
never believing my eye
truly you are a sight to behold
as i wish i knew
a little more of you
so as to sing with the drummers in praise
as you light my world,
a lone star in grace.
This one i found it so special i added it to my favs. 10/10 ofcourse.The poem speaks for itself. Keep up the great work
a beautiful write Hamdid. who was your muse to this poem? i like to know backgrounds behind the poem because they influence the write so very well.
your style is that of the past, your voice is that of the present, beautifull poem.
I don't know what to say about this one other than it has a truly simple beauty to it that cannot be denied. ~Lacey~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i had a lilly once, i still miss her