hamid kareem

My Love

I want to write something beautiful
But try as i might,
Your beauty eclipse any words i might use

I wish to create a lasting monument of you
Like liberty, soaring high in my sky
A symbol of love, mine for you
But sadly, no statue can be as great as you

I have opened my heart to you
Like night and its twinkling stars
But even though you are my light
Without words and trust, how will you know
That you are my one and only, always


At last, i wrote something
They said its beautiful
But it did not make you smile
It did not make your eyes lit
I cannot feel d beauty
I do not tink its dope

All i want is to show you
This feeling thats overwhelming me
But it seems mere words are not enough
What is magic if its not revered
What is beauty if its not seen

Finally i wrote something beautiful
But i do not think its what you need

Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship

Poem Submitted: Friday, August 11, 2017

Form: Blues Poem

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Comments about My Love by hamid kareem

  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (8/11/2017 8:59:00 AM)

    Wishing to create beautiful and new friendship is very interesting. Symbol of love motivates mind entirely. Writing something beautiful is interesting definitely.10

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