Liza Sud


My Favorite Childish Lanes! - Poem by Liza Sud

I wanted to be your dog
And serve you in thankfulness.
A child is a slave of love
If it’s blessed or unblessed.

Such love knows no shame.
My favorite childish lanes!
I want to go there and fall
And cry out of joy non-stop.

On back I lie in the dark.
Clouds are passing up.
Not far away someone goes,
But no one hears my voice.

To disappear I dreamed:
To exist but unseen.
Death will give me this prize –
Unseen in paradise!

Topic(s) of this poem: childhood


Comments about My Favorite Childish Lanes! by Liza Sud

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/2/2015 8:25:00 AM)


    Childhood is an unforgettable and precious chapter in the book of life. The memories of childhood never leave us and come back without any excuses. Wonderfully narrated. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/2/2015 4:55:00 AM)


    Childhood fantasies are often very memorable. So, a trip though childhood lanes must be quite refreshing. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (11/2/2015 4:11:00 AM)


    Beautifully penned child's toughs, take you to your childhood unknowingly. Great job Liza! I love this.+X (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 2, 2015



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