My Feeling I'm Share... Poem by jay patel

My Feeling I'm Share...

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My feeling I'm share
I want to take a dare
To wonder in the fair
I always want to stare
Reason the beauty of your wear
But you always blame the air
It spoils my waving hair
Our meeting is very rare
U come without scare
I m really giving swear
I always take your care

Friday, January 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 28 January 2018

A passionate witty reflection embellished in beautiful poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Jay.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 January 2018

A great start with a short and sweet poem.. welcome to Poem Hunter....10

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Amit Narayan Satpathy 27 January 2018

Good one

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 January 2018

Jay, such a lovely write...10+++

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